Saturday, May 31, 2008

Love Slick

A googled image of an oil slick; then I did some photoshop!

prompt was breaking the rules

A heart cargoed in the
Unconscious rules of
Broken on the sharp
Reef of knowledge
Inequity, can no longer
Be ignored
A love slick, bleeding
Bright fingers of
Tenderness and
Riding murky waves
Bringing hope to
Troubled shores

Copyright Sherry Obsheatz


paisley said...

i find a sense of comfort in your words.....

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

"Unconscious rules of indifference"

Haven't we all felt that, once or again?

Very true.


BELL CURVE, at Nickers and Ink

Rae Trigg said...

Well done. I love the sense of hope and optimism in your poem.

texasblu said...

Very nice take on the prompt rose - I think the imagery you used is fantastic. "A love slick" - goosepimples! :)

Wordcrafter said...

Beautiful White Rose; I see you keep up with the blog's purpose of helping you to "write more"... a good example to be followed!