Monday, September 1, 2008

Bitter


A salt-moon beats

back briny tears,

a pain between

nerve and muscle

turned cold as stone.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

The cold that follows the heat of pain is particularly brutal...

Cynthia said...

this is strong, veryvery good.

paisley said...

wow!! that was awesome.. i just love those little poetic snippets that knock me over!!!!!!