Your words fall
like over ripe
fruit, into that
red meaty marrow
of worn out arguments,
don’t close your eyes
the love is still here, waiting,
lend me your lips, I’ve changed
rediscover me. Kiss the wine
from my mouth, dance upon
my body and uncover that
which makes me shiver
into that liquid place.
like over ripe
fruit, into that
red meaty marrow
of worn out arguments,
don’t close your eyes
the love is still here, waiting,
lend me your lips, I’ve changed
rediscover me. Kiss the wine
from my mouth, dance upon
my body and uncover that
which makes me shiver
into that liquid place.
3 comments:
This is really beautiful. I like the way it hones in on the heart of things in the center with the lines "I've changed / rediscover me" You really open up all the connotations of the word "discover." I also really like what you do with the shape of this piece.
i love the visual form on this piece.. excellent...
OooOh...Rose lend me your lips, I've changed, rediscover me -words
that would make my ears perk up.
Sensual, the earnest honesty is
believable, Don't close your eyes
the love is still there.
Beauty lines mingle into a
beautiful piece.
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