Poetry and Short Stories, peppered with some political rants...
This is perfection in a haiku WR.
Wonderful haiku! I like haikus so much because they're so efficient...
'battered', 'faded', and 'broken';yet holding on to the 'key'. The embers still sputter...?Excellent word play!
Beautiful metaphors!
It's a whole story in three lines. Excellent
such a poignant, pithy haiku. and it matches so well with the painting:I wait lonely-ly,Crying over your letters,Will you come again?
Perfection -Yiu have captured theessence of this heartbreak!
Great match White Rose! Everyone else has already said everything I would have, so I'll just say DITTO. :D
yes, absolutely beautiful with so few words... photo reflects yr ku well...
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Prompt "old key"
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This is perfection in a haiku WR.
Wonderful haiku! I like haikus so much because they're so efficient...
'battered', 'faded', and 'broken';
yet holding on to the 'key'.
The embers still sputter...?
Excellent word play!
Beautiful metaphors!
It's a whole story in three lines. Excellent
such a poignant, pithy haiku. and it matches so well with the painting:
I wait lonely-ly,
Crying over your letters,
Will you come again?
Perfection -Yiu have captured the
essence of this heartbreak!
Great match White Rose! Everyone else has already said everything I would have, so I'll just say DITTO. :D
yes, absolutely beautiful with so few words... photo reflects yr ku well...
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